This is one of my college time effort, which fetched me second prize in elocution, partly because it was my original. Please do read and if you like, appreciate.
Life asks you to stand up ;
Up! To the tip of the Zenith ;
The zenith you need to conquer ;
While conquering the trifles beneath .
The Path you need to stroll ;
Strolled by those gone by !
Gone are those who achieved ;
Achievements that heroes ply!
The World awaits a Mastermind ;
To master his mind in the Dark !
While others keep on deceiving ;
For not the deceived is meant the Mark.
Electrify the Spirits of your Soul ;
For the soul is the most precious !
The precious time lies ahead ;
To waver the most cautious !
‘Make hay while the Sun shines ;
Or the shine shimmers with time ;
The time of life we preserved ;
To revere the zeal from sublime!
Gone is the Past!
Gone are the Failures!
Gone are the Gloomy Days!
The days we cherish are the ones ;
The ones we really appraise !
For we Pray to mighty Lord !
Oh Lord ! This ugly maze ;
The hardness beholds the weakness ;
Weakness of struggles we face !
“Shine ! My Boy!” And his face lights up!
Up like a Comet in sky!
“Sky is the limit!” his father adheres ;
“The only word is ‘TRY’ !”
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Nice
Such a lovely piece of poetry!
I could not understand it completely but I appreciate that you composed a poem. Poems are more difficult to write than articles. Congrats on winning the second prize.
Absolutely amazing! Very good, keep it up.. 🙂
Wow!
So beautifully you have lighted a lamp through your words.
I like it
It was worth winning a prize!
Creative work.. nice..!
So touching!!
Good ONe !! Keep It Up
well written 🙂
Very beautiful and inspiring lines from you…the biggest failure in life is if we do not TRY at all…excellent work..keep writing more…
Wonderful posts !
🙂
Nice.
An amazing and motivating piece of work.
Beautifully written..!!
Great work!
Poetry is something which i won’t be able to do ever,because its not something which can be acquired by rigorous hard work,its a talent possessed by few gifted people…nicely composed,,excellent piece of work!
very very impressive.
Nice!!
Innovative
Really moving!
Very inspiring!
Amazing! Personally, I found it intriguing and genuinely likable.
nice
Influential. Great work
nice…